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TNG ch2

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       Leo lay on the floor unmoving as the female creature looked at the family with black eyes.  Raph felt his anger begin to boil at Leo being out cold on the ground. He looked at Leo only to see a black tail near his head.

       “So what’s going on?” Dog asked, looking at Leo she smiled. ”I was stuck in shadow body traveling for weeks! Finally I got stuck in Leo over there and was able to pop out after a week or two!”

       “Get away from Leo or so help me I will tear your stupid wings out of your body!” Raph warned, he didn’t want this ‘thing’ so close to his brother.

       “But first I would like to know who you are!” Master Splinter interrupted.

       “Can’t you hear you old rat? My name is Dog and I am from Dragon sphere!” Dog said like they should know. She picked Leo up by the neck with her tail.

       “Put. Him. Down.” Raph growled, he got his Sais into his hands ready to attack.

       “Oh chill little red banded freak! I am just taking him with me back to Dragon sphere! Jeez.” Dog said while tightening her hold on Leo.

       “OVER MY DEAD BODY!!!!” Raph screamed as he charged at the creature. But to his surprise she, along with Leo, vanished into thin air. He looked around confused until he saw a black tail peeking out of the corner.

       “Raphael be careful!” Master Splinter warned as Raph approached the corner. But to his surprise a giant gargoyle jumped out and whacked Raph right in the face. He landed on the ground with a thud as the gargoyle, just like Dog and Leo, vanished into thin air at the same spot.

       “Hey guys do you notice something?” April asked, looking at the spot that the three had disappeared. Raph took a closer look at the spot and found a strange white patterned marking.

       Don came forward and studied the strange substance. It was not like anything he had ever seen! It smelt like Kraang!

       “What is it Don?” April asked, craning her neck to see the pattern. Don shook his head; he had no idea what this was. Even if he did know he didn’t think it would help at all.

       “Let’s just step on it and follow them!” Raph growled as he pushed April and Don out of the way. As he stepped on the spot everything disappeared and he was in a cell like room. He looked over to see Leo tied up in chains, his eyes locked on Raph.

       “Raph? What happened?” Leo looked at Raph so innocently that it made Raph want to hug him then and there.

       “Look who decided to join the party!” Raph turned around to see Dog on the other side of the bars. She smirked and laughed when she saw Raph in a protective stance in front of Leo.

       “You really believe you can protect him? How sad, I almost have feelings!” She laughed like a psychopath, it creped Raph out.

       “Raph, who is that?!” Leo asked, fear embedded in his blue eyes.

       “A sick little creep Leo.”
this is the new chapter of my story, I had some writers block so don't kill me! this clears up of what I left out on the other chapter. and could someone tell me how to edit my descriptions? thx to the person who does!

there is 24 more days to submit to my contest before it closes so please send in some work on my journals!

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Nanlee00's avatar
Love the story when's the next chapter.